I usually have an e-serial’s chapter pages open for comments, so readers can provide feedback on what is an early draft. The new website makes that tricky, so instead I opened a separate “blog” page for it.
Did you see typos? Concerns? Plot holes?
Do you just want to comment on the chapter/story?
All feedback is welcome. If you’re unfamiliar with my e-serials, this is an unedited draft. I’ve read it through and tweaked, but I haven’t put it aside and come back for a harder look or sent it out for editing, copyediting and proofreading. Once that’s done (in 2027), it’ll go up for sale. And, of course, if you spot a typo, I’ll get that fixed right away ๐
You can either email mail@kelleyarmstrong.com or you can comment here.
Hi! I love your books ๐
I spotted a little typo:
I scramble around to see him bearing down on us. In life, he was not tall, but in death, he towers over the boys as he stalks toward us, his face twisted >>a with<< malicious glee that makes me want to howl with rage.
Thank you and I'm looking forward to read more!
Thank you! That’s what happens when I edit LOL I’d changed that line and messed it up. Fixed now
Can hardly wait to find out why she killed him and what kind of ghost he is.